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[WALK!]

Glad I took part.

The animations were too repetitive. If you needed more animations, I could have traced every frame of the finale thing, and I'm sure we could have added a background animation. Beyond that, it's pretty good. I see now that I need a NG avatar. Heh.

Insanimation responds:

Thanks for taking part :)

[Super Demo Reel]

I don't understand...

It's a bunch of random sprite animation clips with a couple non-sprite moments, poorly drawn (but well animated, yes), and I don't understand how this could get a daily 3rd place.

I have seen much better work get an average rating of 2.11/5.00, and this does not deserve any special treatment just for the Sonic characters... or even Mario.

Now, I do like the Pokemon moment, the punch, kinda funny in a way.

Try giving your next animation a story, even if it's a demo reel, because it always seems more professional to lead one scene into the next.

To wrap it all up, I liked it slightly, but I gave it a slightly-less-than-fair rating to counteract the 10/10 idiots, even if there aren't even many reviewers to begin with.

PaperBat responds:

How do you give a demo reel a story?

lol, retarded.

[Ghost Out Part 3]

Better voice work is all you need.

I love the art style, and the animation is very smooth. You could stand to put a little entertainment on the preloader, though, and a better microphone would definitely help.

Also, I found you through the SheezyArt Animation Club. :)

RedMongoose responds:

I thought about putting some more stuff in the preloader but I wanted to keep it relatively blank just for consistencies sake