fjgamer's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gunbot]

game doesn't work

It has a very nice story, because it's both funny and good-lookin'. However, the game doesn't like me, it seems to hang on the instructions with only a back button. If it matters, I have NoScript and AdBlock+ enabled to help keep my browser secure. I don't know why those would be the cause of my problem, though.

[Story Tutorial]

Not very helpful.

I can see you put a tiny bit of effort into making this fit the theme of "reading a story", but I think you should make it a lot longer and make the words fit on the pages.

up-a-notch responds:

ok sorry

[Prince of Persia]

This game is confusing.

It auto-runs, down is rewind, it doesn't jump when I want it to, the dash doesn't always work, and I keep having to use the mouse to continue to the next stage.

That said, it isn't terrible, it could definitely be much worse, and I know for a fact that the 3d version is much better.

[Flash Necessities Tutoral]

Flash Necessities my ass.

You need to know a lot more to make a decent Flash animation or game, or even a decent application. This is an extremely short series of tutorials, and I don't recommend it to beginners, because it doesn't explain anything in detail or in a convenient way.

You didn't even cover tweens or event listeners!

Jaye19 responds:

First of all I did emphasize NECESSITIES of a flash movie and not everything that will make you flash cool so I only covered I what think that is the real need and not all those tweens and stuff and this aint a animation tutorial my friend and also a lot of people are saying I explained in a convinient way so before you say that I didnt do it in a convenient way please say the reason so that I'll know what to improve :3

[Mariacarla Boscono]

This game does not belong on NG.

Tankor is right, NG is not a kid-friendly site, so you should try to entertain adults, too. That said, this is not a bad dress-up, it's just not good. The drag-and-drop features are great but could use a snap-on feature. The music is annoying and should not play by default. Maybe you could use music that fits a dress-up.

[Mighty Red Orb]

Mighty but a little unforgiving.

I liked the voice over narration. It was funny and not too annoying. However, the levels are a bit short and a bit unforgiving. Once the wall killed me and I didn't even touch it. Glitches happen, so I won't let the small mishaps lower your score.

[Ultimate Chess]

The computer is too good.

I like the animations for executions, but they get a little annoying, maybe you should make them shorter and have them on the board.

[Flash RPG Game Engine]

Bad game, not a useful engine.

I see you have some coding experience, but you didn't bother to polish the demo up, and honestly, this doesn't seem like a very useful engine. I'll check the site, though, giving you the benefit of the doubt.

[Kill The Spartan]

Damn, that old man is tough.

The only bad point is the fact that we're watching stick figures. It's like not-so-detailed-but-colorful shadows. I'm sure it would be 10x as hard to animate a more detailed character.

That said, the fight scenes are nicely animated, and I love the use of glowing lines.

[Anime Smash Beta]

Not great but has a great presentation.

3/5. If it was completed, it'd get a 5 from me. Anyway, I don't really like that it's just female versions of ripped off characters, but I won't take off from the score for that. I like the controls, but maybe you could add key mapping options.